Knox Eclipse

By noon, we found our way

to a city park, not to escape

the crowds. There was no avoiding

the masses of those who would witness

this matinee of the cosmos,

and I calculated that my former

family would not try

to brave the traffic

to move their caravan somewhere else—

but mostly we both thought it felt more right

to stand among green things that worship

the sun as it performs its great disappearing act

than to stand on oil-black asphalt

before a temple built to worship

an entirely different sort of green thing.

We pass the time by talking about

small stuff, which is not the same

as small talk. Things like how we

loved blowing the fluff from dandelions

and not understanding why

anyone wouldn’t want

more sunbeam-yellow flowers

dotting their lawn.

Things like how fortuitous it was

to be alive during such a rare

celestial conjunction but not as lucky

as I felt to be spending a few more

hours in Sylvie’s company, which I leave

unspoken.

I. First Contact

By first contact (we had together learned

a new vocabulary of the heavens), we stare

upward, eyes sheltered behind our eclipse glasses.

We speak in soft voices about the most awesome

things we had seen in the natural world. For Sylvie,

it was a pod of gray whales off Cape Cod, twenty feet

from her boat, rising from the black depths

like fugitive islands and spouting

in unison; their cool breath settling on her

skin like dew in the summer heat.

I wondered what they thought

of the sun, Sylvie says. Imagine seeing it

for just a few minutes each day

and then back into the cold dark.

I can imagine this.

For me, it was seeing a Girl

with Serious Eyebrows at a campground

in Michigan, but this, too, I leave unspoken.

Instead, I tell her it was driving through Big Sur

in the fall, waves crashing on the rocks

below, fog shrouding the coast redwoods

and spruces, tall and silent

like the ghosts of a race of giants.

II. Second Contact

A reverent hush, then, as the disc of the moon

obscures the face of the sun, bringing a premature

dusk and with it the chirping of crickets

and nightbirds singing their twilight hymns.

And I consider how many things

had to coincide in the Great Clockwork for us

to bear this witness. The moon must be exactly

the right size, viewed from a city park

in Clarksville, Tennessee, two hundred and fifty

thousand miles away, to perfectly cover

the sun, which hangs in the expanse ninety-three million

miles distant. The paths of the moon

and sun must harmonize precisely as they

traverse space. My path

must synchronize precisely with the path

of the Girl with Serious Eyebrows at a campground

in Michigan as we drift across

the land and we must see each other

true, our naked hearts humming

the same note of hunger.

We sit close, the warm skin

of our arms touching, in the sudden cool

and shade of the penumbra,

celestial bodies traveling

through their orbits.

III. Totality

Now it’s nearly dark as night

in the middle of the afternoon,

the air as still as the interval

between breaths.

A few feet away a squirrel sits, tail flitting,

and I think how wonderful

that in our short lives on this planet, we get

to experience this together

and unexpectedly, I begin crying

at the unimaginable marvel of this moment

and I’m almost ashamed

until I glance sidelong

and Sylvie is wiping tears

from behind her glasses. A tear strays

down her cheek and I reach over

and with my good hand brush it

away as gently as though

it’s a raindrop fallen

on the page of a book.

IV. Third Contact

Now the taken light

returns, saffron as if filtered

through the smoke

of some great fire that

lays bare a forest so that new

things can flower.

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