Chasing the Captain's Heart

chapter seven

Vermont greeted October with three days of overcast skies and intermittent rain. Dabbs sat in his bedroom and tried to concentrate on his virtual meeting. Shannon the crocheted ice cream cone stared at him from where he’d propped her on his bookshelf.

“And that’s it,” the freelance editor he’d hired said, pushing waves of dark hair over her shoulder.

“A couple of tweaks in the second book to make the theme clearer and adjusting the language in all three books for a middle-grade audience. I’d also recommend changing either Simon or Silver’s name in the third book; they’re similar enough that readers might get confused. ”